Visually this game was really cool, I actually thought the comic parts might have been from an existing comic!
The story was interesting, and the premise pretty neat. Gameplay wise it felt disconnected, with multiple small minigames scattered between. It was obvious the story was the focus on this project.
Overall it was a fun short story with some basic, but bug free gameplay.
Thank you for your feedback! I noticed that there is too much story and little gameplay in the last day of the jam so I quickly threw some mini games in. I've learned my mistake, I have some kind of curse 🤣: with each game I make the story and cutscenes longer and gameplay - smaller and in the end I don't know if I'm making a video game or a short movie.
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Visually this game was really cool, I actually thought the comic parts might have been from an existing comic!
The story was interesting, and the premise pretty neat. Gameplay wise it felt disconnected, with multiple small minigames scattered between. It was obvious the story was the focus on this project.
Overall it was a fun short story with some basic, but bug free gameplay.
Rating 4/5 - Needed more cohesive gameplay.
Thank you for your feedback! I noticed that there is too much story and little gameplay in the last day of the jam so I quickly threw some mini games in. I've learned my mistake, I have some kind of curse 🤣: with each game I make the story and cutscenes longer and gameplay - smaller and in the end I don't know if I'm making a video game or a short movie.